bird plush

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bird plush

Is this a good opportunity for a book?

The sun burst from behind the curtains of my, birds chirpped noisely. As much as I did not want I knew I had to wake up. It was already 10:00 AM. I smiled back and wrapped his arms stretched above my head. I threw one back and forth across my sheets purple silk. Slowly, I climbed into my bed, my feet touched the soft plush carpet. I looked over my shoulder, the bed was a disaster. I pulled the dildo tangled black and purple and smoothed it over my bed, along with fluffing pillows and putting them in place.

To be honest, many of them did not make sense. Me 'll go through it with you: The sun burst from behind my curtains, noisely chirpped birds. [The sun does not "burst" from behind the curtain, that is a bit of a stretch. I would say that "looked" or something like that. You should say "chirp." It is written "loud".] As as much as I wanted, I knew I had to wake up. [Fine] It was 10:00 AM. I smiled back and wrapped his arms stretched above my head. [Why What are smiles when I wake?] pulled me back and forth in my purple silk sheets. [Try a side to side. Return makes it sound like if you were sitting, lying, sitting, lying ...] Gradually, I got to my bed, my feet touched the soft plush carpet. [Fine] I looked over my shoulder, the bed was a disaster. [Replace the comma with a semicolon.] I shook her tangled black and purple dildo and smoothed it over my bed, fluff the pillows with and put in place. [A dildo can not just be tangled, and I would not say "with". Neither should be used three times in a sentence. Try "shook black and purple comforter, smoothing the other side of my bed, and then fluffed the pillows and put them in place. "I'm not here to make you feel good, I'm here to help you grow as a writer. Consider that before my thumb down!